vox nihili

“Miyela, are you ready?” Kartoeb called through the parting in the woven curtains. I pushed back my hair, inspecting it in the chip of mica all of my tribe used ...

A few awkward phrases which have pretty much been pointed out. I loved the whole thing. :D But when you say 'village idiot' it makes me think medeival-not modern. Ya ...

Hmm...here's the song with what edits I'd have made... You live and die You have to learn to cry Never know whats Around that bend Never know what could cause ...

Wow! Good for you, thinking to take this picture. I don't know much about photography, but it seems like a really good picture, with everything in focus, and a good ...

Please review-and any suggestions as to a title are more than welcome by me, idk what Angel thinks about that.... Anyway, this will be continued... ........ I sat down behind ...

In the first paragraph a/b the kid's voices, you meant 'decibel'. I didn't find anything wrong in the rest of it, but a few things: when the guys are talking ...

i second the person who said fifty evil emoticons go with this. totaly. very awkard rhyming-this is meant to be really awkward, am i write or am i right???? :?:?:? ...

I liked it alot. But i have this thing for the really dragged out spacing-it irks me. i said this to a person earlier tonight, but please, don't take it ...

I loved it. idk a/b the r-rated thingy. I didn't find it disturbing inthe least, save for the whole scenario. like, thats r-rated? if so, then i don't have barely ...

A good drawing. -applause- but she has an unrealistically long and uh, skinny nose. The proportion is off, her head's too big, and her shoulders are way too small, not ...

I loved it, and everyone else has gone over the grammar and that kind of thing, so I have one thing to say: he can't have autism. Autism is a ...

I'm Solairis, a recombinant raptor/human with a you-look-at-me-wrong-and-I'll-bite-attitude.... ....... :smt059 Iglesia smiled, and the kid at the Mcdonald's table across from ours let go a mighty scr

I am reading Treasure Island by Robert Louis Stevenson for English class. And whatever here that strikes me as interesting...

Other than critiqueing-have you read the last book yet??? Anyway, it was a really well-written piece, with the exception of a few repetitive details, and a few confusing points, (the ...

Thanks for commenting! :D I'm glad you could understand the whole sort of scenario/emotional set-up thing. That was my main concern about the poem...the whole metaphor. I really do need ...